Friday, December 18, 2009

Ode to loneliness

Late at night when the lights are gone
And silence is inching forward darkness
When light has closed its eyes and taking a nap
And waiting for the morning rays to crack the dawn

I find myself in your arms
Waiting for your sweet cuddles to start
As you take me close to your bossom
I feel my world coming to a standstill

Thanks for being there always
And feeling me so that I don’t need to feel you again
Thanks for everything.

5 comments:

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I may not have got it right this time. But I could sense gratitude towards motherly love. The touch is so sweet, so heartening, so beautiful, it is indeed like you say And feeling me so that I don’t need to feel you again. I am touched.

Chhaya said...

Sweet, this one :)

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

Seems a pretty hurried composition this. Knowing you, this could have been better. Feels as if the thoughts are incomplete....

Anorak said...

thanks friends for ur comments and sujoy u r right it might sound hurried coz it was written by me atleast 8-9 years back...i discovered the dairy a few days back so decided to include those poetries in my blog....scribbles from a lost dairy... keep walking

Poornima said...

If you are dedicating this one to loneliness...then i wud say its amazing.no matter what we do at the fag end of it loneliness is the only everlasting mate :)