It's too dark inside
I don't want to stay here anymore
I want to taste the glowing light
please set me free, let me offshore
My windows to the world
wide open but still blur
I'm a prisoner of your pain
let me smear over your scar
It's been long time coming
don't let me suffocate and dry
there is a reason in reason itself
nothing is trivial, atleast try
My life is just a moment
I was born to die
Don't push me to immortality
please bid me a final goodbye
11 comments:
Great lines! The longing for release...is something i have experienced too.
Poetry, I feel is the best way to collect a lot of abstract ideas...which are otherwise pretty difficult to express.
And I like your expression :D
bedho naa aar...
rekho naa aar...
kool-er kachakachi, ami doobte raji achi...
there is a reason in reason itself
nothing is trivial, atleast try...
loved those lines...
hope you are ok buddy, and not undergoing any personal pain?
Thanks LGL...its not about me but someone I know, who hasn't cried for the last one year even though he has gone through a lot of pain and even passed his days in mental asylum....its just my way of expressing the pain which a tear goes through, coz his life is to die to relieve one of the anxiety....keep walking!!!
its beautiful.
n it became more meaningful and painful n of course beautiful to me once i read ur comment above.
thnx 4 ur visit :)
tk cr :)
"I'm a prisoner of your pain"..........."there is a reason in reason itself".......WOW these lines are!!!
I am not sure whether I know you in person..I know quite a folks from AU...Anorak a pen name..is it?
@Tanaya: U don't know me but I know u, coz I have often seen u debate during ur Ramanuj days...i am also from SCS...:)
From SCS..wow grt!!! :) :) :)I still feel i know you..Debates..ya i miss those days...tamojit da, deepanjan da, REC, SMC folks..it was fun fighting things out. I miss all these...I can hardly talk gud these days..m always searching for words..software has ruined me..:(
anorak
kono ek
kimbhut jontu?
nam jodi
na bolo
khelbo na kintu...
:D kidding.keep your parda if you like. but come and read...
"My life is just a moment
I was born to die
Don't push me to immortality
please bid me a final goodbye "
..very truly and very beautifully said..
keno?
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