Thursday, May 7, 2009

Silent Tears

It's too dark inside
I don't want to stay here anymore
I want to taste the glowing light
please set me free, let me offshore

My windows to the world
wide open but still blur
I'm a prisoner of your pain
let me smear over your scar

It's been long time coming
don't let me suffocate and dry
there is a reason in reason itself
nothing is trivial, atleast try

My life is just a moment
I was born to die
Don't push me to immortality
please bid me a final goodbye

11 comments:

Zlaek said...

Great lines! The longing for release...is something i have experienced too.
Poetry, I feel is the best way to collect a lot of abstract ideas...which are otherwise pretty difficult to express.
And I like your expression :D

Little Girl Lost said...

bedho naa aar...
rekho naa aar...
kool-er kachakachi, ami doobte raji achi...

there is a reason in reason itself
nothing is trivial, atleast try...

loved those lines...

hope you are ok buddy, and not undergoing any personal pain?

Anorak said...

Thanks LGL...its not about me but someone I know, who hasn't cried for the last one year even though he has gone through a lot of pain and even passed his days in mental asylum....its just my way of expressing the pain which a tear goes through, coz his life is to die to relieve one of the anxiety....keep walking!!!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

its beautiful.

n it became more meaningful and painful n of course beautiful to me once i read ur comment above.

thnx 4 ur visit :)

tk cr :)

Tanaya said...

"I'm a prisoner of your pain"..........."there is a reason in reason itself".......WOW these lines are!!!
I am not sure whether I know you in person..I know quite a folks from AU...Anorak a pen name..is it?

still thinking !!! said...
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Anorak said...

@Tanaya: U don't know me but I know u, coz I have often seen u debate during ur Ramanuj days...i am also from SCS...:)

Tanaya said...

From SCS..wow grt!!! :) :) :)I still feel i know you..Debates..ya i miss those days...tamojit da, deepanjan da, REC, SMC folks..it was fun fighting things out. I miss all these...I can hardly talk gud these days..m always searching for words..software has ruined me..:(

Little Girl Lost said...

anorak
kono ek
kimbhut jontu?

nam jodi
na bolo
khelbo na kintu...

:D kidding.keep your parda if you like. but come and read...

atanu nath said...

"My life is just a moment
I was born to die
Don't push me to immortality
please bid me a final goodbye "

..very truly and very beautifully said..

exhausted said...

keno?