Friday, February 13, 2009

Reminiscence of remnants

Some old letters lay peacefully,
freezing time in each of their fold,
Some antique articles of antic times,
sleep unaware of the conspiracies untold.

Some wishes, some prayers,
some words written with unnoticed flair,
some promises, some hopes,
And some silence, all nude and bare.
.....................
.....................
.....................
Breeze paint pictures,
Mind traverse zillion light years,
Eyes shun dreams, still wistful,
Heart keeps trudging on.

Another year passes by.

5 comments:

still thinking !!! said...

awesome! got what you ment :)

still thinking !!! said...

jus a sugg,

how about chaning the "but" wistful with a "comma" and then a "still" before wistful ??

i.e "Eyes shun dreams, still wistful

Extremity said...

the reader's heart also trudging
u pessimistic or wat ?

Anorak said...

pessimism is the elixir of life for the doleful soul...however, i'm not a pessimist but in love with pessimism...keep walking!!!

Tanaya said...

Lovely!!! "some words written with unnoticed flair"...i liked this line :)