Monday, December 22, 2008

Lost Kite

Light is not so bright after all,
when everywhere there's darkness and woeful plight,
I would better stay in anonymity
and see the demons fight,
i am better a dead poet,
a vagabond and lost kite.

6 comments:

Sagorika Singha said...

lost things have their own story to tell.. that is what is most amazing about them... don't know why .. loved this composition...
sometimes when one is lost... they get a better direction..
keep writing..

claire said...

loved this one, too..

The Sunflower Collective said...

I am a fan of the first line

Sumi Mathai said...

ohh..pessimism again...
killing the light too..??
darkness at its height

Sumi Mathai said...

just a suggestion..
in the 2nd line,'when' wud b a little more apt than 'where' since when can imply the time and place as well.

Amit Kumar Das said...

thanks, ur suggestions accepted, I have already made the changes...

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