The world is just like a cabbage
layer after layer, peeling off every moment
umpteen empty faces grasping for breath
jostling for a foothold, running frantically
Who likes tortoise these days,
when like ATMs, stardom kiosk litters the earth
smoke ideologies, rape innocence
be a star or get lost
9 comments:
'Who likes tortoise these days,
when like ATMs, stardom kiosk litters the earth
smoke ideologies, rape innocence
be a star or get lost'
tortoise are anyways, becoming rare... may be because for this exact reason..
Indeed they are a rare species these days..but the funniest part of the story is that, even those who prefer to be one end up huffing and puffing till they change themselves into a beautiful butterfly from a larva .... so it is a lack of opportunity rather than choice....keep walking!!!
loved it.. each word is justified here, makes a lot of sense .. good work :)
thanks Lena....for ur appreciation....:)
Anorak, just popping in by accident, this is one 'make sense' scirbble....Anna :)
great goin mate!
A nice one indeed. Thanks for leaving a comment on my blog.
some very strong lines there..
keep writing..
wowww.....brilliant presentation of today's world
plz remove this word verification
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