Monday, April 20, 2009


When life beckons you
and you take a step forward
may the rain run down the sky
and settle the dust,
wash away the mud from your feet
O girl! Don't you worry about the rain
They are just lonely droplets
that waited as dew on the petals
they are just unshed tears
Oh! please don't give them any name.


still thinking !!! said...

I like the unconventional rhyme of rain and name.

and then again I love the entire poem -the emotions you have painted,the words you have used.all in all a brillaint piece of poetry...almost like a song....
try working on it and extended it to a song...

coffeeismypoison said...

Still thinking is right...extend it. its beautiful enough to be a song...pls try :o)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

tomar lekha joto gulo ami porechi, eta amar favorite kobita.