When life beckons you
and you take a step forward
may the rain run down the sky
and settle the dust,
wash away the mud from your feet
O girl! Don't you worry about the rain
They are just lonely droplets
that waited as dew on the petals
they are just unshed tears
Oh! please don't give them any name.
3 comments:
I like the unconventional rhyme of rain and name.
and then again I love the entire poem -the emotions you have painted,the words you have used.all in all a brillaint piece of poetry...almost like a song....
try working on it and extended it to a song...
Still thinking is right...extend it. its beautiful enough to be a song...pls try :o)
tomar lekha joto gulo ami porechi, eta amar favorite kobita.
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